<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>This looks great: thanks for moving it along!</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Minor notes (all copy editing):</div><div><br></div><div>It could use some editing to bring it into the present:</div><div><br></div><div>"""</div><div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">Existing package repositories such as CPAN <a class="footnote-reference" href="https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0541/#id12" id="id3" style="box-sizing:border-box;text-decoration:none;border-bottom-width:1px;border-bottom-style:solid;border-bottom-color:rgb(255,223,118);display:inline">[3]</a>, NPM <a class="footnote-reference" href="https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0541/#id13" id="id4" style="box-sizing:border-box;text-decoration:none;border-bottom-width:1px;border-bottom-style:solid;border-bottom-color:rgb(255,223,118);display:inline">[4]</a>, and GitHub <a class="footnote-reference" href="https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0541/#id14" id="id5" style="box-sizing:border-box;text-decoration:none;border-bottom-width:1px;border-bottom-style:solid;border-bottom-color:rgb(255,223,118);display:inline">[5]</a> will be investigated as prior art in this field.</span></div><div>"""</div><div><br></div><div>Probably need a time scale on:</div><div>""""<br><ul class="simple" style="box-sizing:border-box;margin:0px 0px 1.3125em 1.5em;padding:0px;border:0px;line-height:1.875;vertical-align:baseline;list-style:square"><li style="box-sizing:border-box;margin:0.2625em 0px;padding:0px;border:0px;font-style:inherit;font-variant-caps:inherit;line-height:1.65em;vertical-align:baseline"><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">no activity from the owner on the project's home page.</span></li></ul><div>"""</div><div><br></div><div>Minor edit:</div><div>"<span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">the candidate is able to demonstrate own failed attempts to contact the existing owner"</span></div><div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)"><br></span></div><div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">To </span></div><div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)"><br></span></div><div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">"the candidate is able to demonstrate their own failed attempts to contact the existing owner"</span></div><div><br></div><div>(Adding "their" -- or his/her)</div><div><br></div><div>Same under "abandoned".</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>-CHB</div><div><br></div><div><div>Sent from my iPhone</div></div></div><div><br>On Sep 8, 2017, at 12:14 PM, Lukasz Langa <<a href="mailto:lukasz@langa.pl">lukasz@langa.pl</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>I gathered and responded to feedback on this early this year. I think the PEP is ready to be accepted.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><a href="https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0541/" class="">https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0541/</a></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">- Ł</div></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><span>_______________________________________________</span><br><span>Distutils-SIG maillist - <a href="mailto:Distutils-SIG@python.org">Distutils-SIG@python.org</a></span><br><span><a href="https://mail.python.org/mailman/listinfo/distutils-sig">https://mail.python.org/mailman/listinfo/distutils-sig</a></span><br></div></blockquote></body></html>