https://bugs.python.org/review/26889/diff/17111/Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rs... File Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rst (right): https://bugs.python.org/review/26889/diff/17111/Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rs... Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rst:17: XML-RPC is a Remote Procedure Call method that uses XML passed via HTTP as a HTTP(S) better? https://bugs.python.org/review/26889/diff/17111/Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rs... Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rst:49: New blank line separates instance construction parameters above from instance use parameters. Good. I think you could even something like "The following parameters govern the use of the returned proxy instance." https://bugs.python.org/review/26889/diff/17111/Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rs... Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rst:53: all clients and servers; see http://ontosys.com/xml-rpc/extensions.php for a New link displays page with "Wayback Machine doesn't have that page archived." Is any more description really needed? Can you just incorporate it? https://bugs.python.org/review/26889/diff/17111/Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rs... Doc/library/xmlrpc.client.rst:76: Not sure that deletion of sentence is an improvement. See tracker post. https://bugs.python.org/review/26889/