[issue17057] Data model documentation grammar
New submission from Hobs: New-style and old-style class expalanation in the datamodel section has minor grammatical errors and one minor ambiguity that could be improved. http://docs.python.org/2/reference/datamodel.html#new-style-and-classic-clas... * "independently of" should always be "indepenent of" * single hyphens (-) should be double-hyphens (--) for an m-dash * "flavour" should be "flavor" (used 100x more often in docs.python) * "only the symantics of..." is ambiguous. can't tell if 'only' modifies 'symantics' or 'new-style classes'? ---------- assignee: docs@python components: Documentation files: datamodel-reference-docs.patch keywords: patch messages: 180812 nosy: Hobson.Lane, docs@python priority: normal severity: normal status: open title: Data model documentation grammar type: enhancement versions: Python 2.7 Added file: http://bugs.python.org/file28876/datamodel-reference-docs.patch _______________________________________ Python tracker <report@bugs.python.org> <http://bugs.python.org/issue17057> _______________________________________
Mark Lawrence added the comment: I'm not particularly interested in 2.7 documentation but is there anybody out there who could review this please. ---------- nosy: +BreamoreBoy _______________________________________ Python tracker <report@bugs.python.org> <http://bugs.python.org/issue17057> _______________________________________
Roundup Robot added the comment: New changeset b6fab5c89ca9 by Georg Brandl in branch '2.7': Closes #17057: fix grammar in old-style vs new-style class docs. https://hg.python.org/cpython/rev/b6fab5c89ca9 ---------- nosy: +python-dev resolution: -> fixed stage: -> resolved status: open -> closed _______________________________________ Python tracker <report@bugs.python.org> <http://bugs.python.org/issue17057> _______________________________________
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