Raymond Hettinger added the comment:
I also don't agree with most of the typographic changes and, like Éric find some of the grammar changes to be pedantic.
The OP refers to his own changes as "editorial infelicities". This should have been a warning sign.
The OP further warns, "I have been reading the Language Reference Manual in order to teach myself Python 3" which explains why Éric has found " a few misunderstandings of Python".
If the OP cares enough to prepare a chapter by chapter patch (as suggested by Terry), I would be happy to review them one by one, applying any that are actual readability improvements.
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