[EuroPython] FYI: Updated press release
Paul Everitt
paul@zope.com
Fri, 17 May 2002 13:49:32 -0400
Here is an updated version of the press release (reviewed earlier by the
executive committee):
http://europython.zope.nl/draftwiki/UpdatedPressRelease
Some changes:
o I added a tagline under the title ("Inaugural event...") as a way
focus on the selling point
o I tried to remove some extraneous stuff in the first few
paragraphs, such as the background of the EuroZope
foundation's formation. Instead, I tried to focus the lead-in
on answering: "Why should I attend?"
o The "dropping names" part was broken into bullets, so people
that visually scan web pages can pick them out more easily.
--Paul