[pypy-svn] r40950 - in pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples: console data

[guido at codespeak.net]

Author: guido
Date: Wed Mar 21 17:09:47 2007
New Revision: 40950

Modified:
   pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/console/console.py
   pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/data/index.html
Log:
Some language improvements.


Modified: pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/console/console.py
==============================================================================
--- pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/console/console.py	(original)
+++ pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/console/console.py	Wed Mar 21 17:09:47 2007
@@ -15,24 +15,26 @@
 commproxy.USE_MOCHIKIT = True
 
 FUNCTION_LIST = ["load_console", "console_onload"]
-HELP = {'python':"just python, play as you like :)",
+HELP = {'python':"just Python, play as you like :)",
         'pypy-c':
 '''
-This is the PyPy standart interpreter translated to C with following features:
+This is the PyPy standard interpreter translated to C with the following features:
 <ul>
-   <li><b>Stackless</b> - You can use full stackless features including
-   tasklets, channels, coroutines and greenlets, full list of examples
-   and niceties can be found <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/stackless.html">on a stackless docs</a>
+   <li><b>Stackless</b> - You can use all stackless features including
+   tasklets, channels, coroutines and greenlets, more information and some
+   examples can be found in the 
+   <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/stackless.html">PyPy stackless documentation</a>.
    </li>
    <li><b>Transparent proxy</b> - This is a unique PyPy interpreter feature,
-   which allows you to provide application-level controller for every possible
-   object. Details and snippets can be found on <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/objspace-proxies.html#tproxy">a transparent proxy doc</a></li>
+   which allows you to provide application-level controller for any kind of
+   object. Details and snippets can be found in the
+   <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/objspace-proxies.html#tproxy">transparent proxy documentation</a>.</li>
 </ul>
 ''',
-        'pypy-c-thunk':'''the PyPy standart interpreter compiled to C with
-        a <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/objspace-proxies.html#the-thunk-object-space">thunk object space</a>''',
-        'pypy-c-taint':'''the PyPy standart interpreter compiled to C with
-        a <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/objspace-proxies.html#the-taint-object-space">taint object space</a>'''}
+        'pypy-c-thunk':'''the PyPy standard interpreter compiled to C using
+        the <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/objspace-proxies.html#the-thunk-object-space">thunk object space</a>''',
+        'pypy-c-taint':'''the PyPy standard interpreter compiled to C using
+        the <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/objspace-proxies.html#the-taint-object-space">taint object space</a>'''}
 
 class Ignore(Exception):
     pass

Modified: pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/data/index.html
==============================================================================
--- pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/data/index.html	(original)
+++ pypy/dist/pypy/translator/js/examples/data/index.html	Wed Mar 21 17:09:47 2007
@@ -10,24 +10,25 @@
   <div id="metaspace">
     <h1 class="title">PyPy[js]</h1>
     <div class="menubar">
-      <a href="console">Python consoles</a> - <a href="http://play1.codespeak.net:8058/">ANSI terminal</a> - <a href="/bnb">Bub'n'Bros JavaScript version</a>
+      <a href="/console">Python consoles</a> - <a href="http://play1.codespeak.net:8058/">ANSI terminal</a> - <a href="/bnb">Bub'n'Bros JavaScript version</a>
     </div>
   </div>
 
   <div id="main">
-  <p>This site presents various demos created using
+  <p>This site presents various demos created with
   <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/">PyPy's</a> compiler toolchain
-  to generate a JavaScript code out of an
-  <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/coding-guide.html#restricted-python">RPython</a> code.</p>
+  to generate JavaScript code out of
+  <a href="http://codespeak.net/pypy/dist/pypy/doc/coding-guide.html#restricted-python">RPython</a>.</p>
 
-  <p>You can also play a bit with PyPy's unique features on consoles,
-  which run underlaying process of pypy standard interpreter translated
-  to C or CLI. On each console there is a little help to try out features
+  <p>It also allows you to play with PyPy's unique features on consoles
+  presenting a PyPy standard interpreter translated to C or
+  CLI (forwarded from the server). On each console there is
+  a little help box which explains the features.
   </p>
 
-  <p><b>Note: this demos are set up on the replicable xen instance, but
-  please do not vandalise the machine, otherwise we would be forced to
-  take it down</b></p>
+  <p><b>Note: these demos are set up on a replicable Xen instance, but
+  please do not vandalise the machine, otherwise we will be forced to
+  take it down.</b></p>
   </div>
 </body>
 </html>