[pypy-svn] r59663 - pypy/extradoc/talk/pycon2009

[pedronis at codespeak.net]

Author: pedronis
Date: Sun Nov  2 18:51:19 2008
New Revision: 59663

Modified:
   pypy/extradoc/talk/pycon2009/abstract.txt
Log:
some tweaking, mostly english



Modified: pypy/extradoc/talk/pycon2009/abstract.txt
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--- pypy/extradoc/talk/pycon2009/abstract.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/extradoc/talk/pycon2009/abstract.txt	Sun Nov  2 18:51:19 2008
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 PyPy status talk
 ================
 
-In this talk, I'll present last year of improvements that happened in the pypy
-area. PyPy went a long way from being a research project towards being a
-usable python interpreter. Although pypy is not yet viable cpython
+In this talk, I'll present the improvements that happened last year in PyPy. 
+PyPy went a long way from being purely a research project towards being a
+usable python interpreter. Although pypy is not yet a viable CPython
 replacement, PyPy is able to run sophisticated python applications like
-django or twisted. Talk will also contain part about motivation driving
-PyPy's developement and targets for the future.
+django or twisted. This talk will also contain a part about the motivations driving
+current PyPy's developement and its targets for the future.