[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: Some cleanups.

[edelsohn]

Author: edelsohn
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r4185:958c29a7ede1
Date: 2012-04-11 09:23 -0400
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/958c29a7ede1/

Log:	Some cleanups.

diff --git a/blog/draft/pycon-wrapup.rst b/blog/draft/pycon-wrapup.rst
--- a/blog/draft/pycon-wrapup.rst
+++ b/blog/draft/pycon-wrapup.rst
@@ -6,12 +6,13 @@
 
 From the PyPy perspective, a lot at PyCon was about PyPy. Listing things:
 
-* David Beazley did an excellent keynote on trying to dive head-first into
-  PyPy and at least partly failing. He however did not fail to explain
-  bits and pieces about PyPy's architecture. `Video`_ is available.
+* David Beazley presented an excellent keynote describing his experience
+  diving head-first into PyPy and at least partly failing. He, however, did
+  not fail to explain bits and pieces about PyPy's architecture.
+  `Video`_ is available.
 
 * We gave tons of talks, including the `tutorial`_, `why pypy by example`_
-  and `pypy's JIT architecturew`_
+  and `pypy's JIT architecture`_
 
 * We had a giant influx of new commiters, easily doubling the amount of pull
   requests ever created for PyPy. The main topics for newcomers were numpy and
@@ -31,5 +32,5 @@
 .. _`Video`: http://pyvideo.org/video/659/keynote-david-beazley
 .. _`tutorial`: http://pyvideo.org/video/612/how-to-get-the-most-out-of-your-pypy
 .. _`why pypy by example`: http://pyvideo.org/video/661/why-pypy-by-example
-.. _`pypy's JIT architecturew`: http://pyvideo.org/video/662/how-the-pypy-jit-works
+.. _`pypy's JIT architecture`: http://pyvideo.org/video/662/how-the-pypy-jit-works
 .. _`prove him correct`: http://mrjoes.github.com/2011/12/15/sockjs-bench.html