[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: clarify

cfbolz noreply at buildbot.pypy.org
Mon Aug 6 10:57:57 CEST 2012


Author: Carl Friedrich Bolz <cfbolz at gmx.de>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r4419:5b6cc23a781f
Date: 2012-08-06 09:20 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/5b6cc23a781f/

Log:	clarify

diff --git a/talk/dls2012/paper.tex b/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
--- a/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
+++ b/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
@@ -1030,21 +1030,10 @@
 \section{Related Work}
 \label{sec:related}
 
-\reva{
-First sentence of the related work section is kind of
-unfortunate. It is unclear what the reference at the end of the
-sentence is good for. To support the meaning of the entire sentence?
-Or is it just a reference to the standard loop invariant code motion
-techniques? The contribution of your paper seems much smaller than
-in the former case compared to the latter one. While I have not
-checked the content of the book, I believe the latter is the correct
-interpretation. You should remove this opportunity for
-misinterpretation.}
-
-The effect of combining a one pass optimization with loop peeling gives
-completely standard loop invariant code motion optimizations
-\cite{muchnick_advanced_1997}. We do not claim any novelty in the effect, but
-think that our implementation scheme is a very simple one.
+Loop invariant code motion optimizations are completely
+standard~\cite{muchnick_advanced_1997}. Therefore, the effects that our
+optimization achieves is not in any way new. However, we think that achieving
+it as described in this paper is simpler than explicit algorithms.
 
 \revc{
 The discussion of LuaJIT is unsatisfying.  It's not clear to me from that one


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