[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: I think these are fine

cfbolz noreply at buildbot.pypy.org
Thu Aug 16 20:01:44 CEST 2012


Author: Carl Friedrich Bolz <cfbolz at gmx.de>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r4647:4dff8f25621f
Date: 2012-08-16 20:01 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/4dff8f25621f/

Log:	I think these are fine

diff --git a/talk/dls2012/paper.tex b/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
--- a/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
+++ b/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
@@ -231,12 +231,6 @@
 \section{Motivation}
 \label{sec:Motivation}
 
-\revc{
-Don't break code listings across pages, as at the start of section 3.  It makes
-them very hard to follow.
-}
-\cfbolz{let's do that only at the very end, just before submitting}
-
 To motivate the approach we propose here, let's look at a trivial (unrealistic)
 trace which corresponds to an infinite loop:
 
@@ -474,13 +468,6 @@
 
 \section{Making Trace Optimizations Loop Aware}
 
-\revc{
-In general, the paper is over-long on generalities and too short on details.
-For example, the description of the basic technique at the beginning of section
-5 is the third time the idea is explained at basically the same level of detail
-(the others are in section 2 and section 4).
-}
-
 Before a trace is passed to the backend compiling it into machine code
 it is optimized to achieve better performance.
 One goal of that is to move 


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