[issue11071] What's New review comments

[Éric Araujo]

Éric Araujo <merwok at netwok.org> added the comment:

Attached patch adds a missing attribution, a missing bug number, fixes one typo (“content manager”) and five grammar issues.

I haven’t had time to make a full read-through during the last weeks, but here are a few comments about the overall structure of the file:
- The introduction is a bit scarce (compare that of 2.6);
- “Other Language Changes” sounds strange, given that the previous sections (PEPs) are language as well as library changes → name it something like “Small Language Changes”;
- “New, Improved, and Deprecated Modules” are not sorted nor grouped;
- Ditto for the bits of advice in the Porting section;
- The small sections about Unicode and codecs could be merged;
- What Antoine said about “Code repository”.

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keywords: +patch
Added file: http://bugs.python.org/file20796/whatsnew-fixes.diff

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