[Python-checkins] r73738 - python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst

[r.david.murray]

Author: r.david.murray
Date: Wed Jul  1 04:49:10 2009
New Revision: 73738

Log:
Make punctuation prettier and break up run-on sentence.


Modified:
   python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst

Modified: python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst
==============================================================================
--- python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst	(original)
+++ python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst	Wed Jul  1 04:49:10 2009
@@ -2107,7 +2107,7 @@
 
         os.close(sys.stdin.fileno())
 
-    In the :meth:`multiprocessing.Process._bootstrap` method of - this resulted
+    in the :meth:`multiprocessing.Process._bootstrap` method --- this resulted
     in issues with processes-in-processes. This has been changed to::
 
         sys.stdin.close()
@@ -2116,7 +2116,7 @@
     Which solves the fundamental issue of processes colliding with each other
     resulting in a bad file descriptor error, but introduces a potential danger
     to applications which replace :func:`sys.stdin` with a "file-like object"
-    with output buffering, this danger is that if multiple processes call
+    with output buffering.  This danger is that if multiple processes call
     :func:`close()` on this file-like object, it could result in the same
     data being flushed to the object multiple times, resulting in corruption.