[OT] - Requesting Comments for Process Definition and Presentation
ilias at lazaridis.com
Sat Jan 14 16:31:09 EST 2006
Steve Holden wrote:
> Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
>> Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
>>> comp.lang.python / comp.lang.ruby
>>> I would like to ask for feedback on the Process Definition and
>> Based on the summary of the feedback so far, I've focused on one page
>> - the main page:
>> Although it needs a review from a native english speaker, I think that
>> this should give now a clear summary, without forcing the reader to
>> think very much:
>> Lazaridis ReEngineering is specialized on System Evaluation and
>> Our services are specialized on software-companies. The services use a
> for software developers and vendors.
Our services are specialized for the business domain "software development"
> It certainly reads more like I'd be talking to a human being now.
Thank you for your gentle corrections (i've applied all, exept the one
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