Feedback desired on reworked ch 1 progr. intro (now Python 3.x, Windows)

[Alf P. Steinbach]

* Rhodri James:
> Before we start, can I just say that I find Google Docs loathsome?
> 
> On Sat, 31 Oct 2009 07:40:36 -0000, Alf P. Steinbach <alfps at start.no> 
> wrote:
> 
>> I hope this new version of ch 1 is, well, better, addresses some of 
>> the concerns raised? <g>
> 
> Section 1.1 needs serious work.

Could you please expand on that?

It is a hint.

Byt it doesn't leave me with much to go on regarding what you mean.


>  You have a very assertive writing style
> and a lot of things that you definitively state are at best debatable.
> If I'd picked that up in a shop and browsed that opening, I'd put the
> book down and walk away; essentially you're calling your accuracy into
> question before you've even said anything about programming.

Could you please expand on this also? Sort of, more concrete?


Cheers & thanks,

- Alf