English version for Mémento Python 3 (draft, readers needed)

[Jugurtha Hadjar]

On 06/05/2012 06:32 PM, Laurent Pointal wrote:
> Hello,
>
> I started a first translation of my document originally in french. Could
> some fluent english people read it and indicate errors or bad english
> expressions.
>
> http://perso.limsi.fr/pointal/python:memento
>
> Thanks.
> A+
> Laurent.
>

Very nice !

Some additions..

"formating" --> "formatting"

In the french version: "Parcours des index de la séquence" .. In the 
english one "Go over sequence's index" .. I think it would be"Go over 
sequence's indexes".

In the upper left corner, the "sigma" sign for the sum of the squares. 
i=1, i=100... It should be "100" alone, not "i=100". The "i" is written 
only on the bottom of sigma.

"strings formating" --> "string formatting"


"range returns a « generator », convert it to list to see.." --> 
"converts" instead of "convert".

"frequently used in for iterative loops" --> .. I think it should be 
"frequently used in "for" iterative loops" .. It is confusing if there 
are no quotes, because "for" is a meaningful english word.. So 
specifying you are talking about the reserved word would be nice.

"storage of data on disk, and read back" --> maybe something like 
"storing data on disk, and reading it back".

"memorisation" --> "memorization" (most used spelling).

"initialisation" --> "initialization"


Thanks you,

-- 
~Jugurtha Hadjar,