[Distutils] setuptools doc patch

John J Lee jjl at pobox.com
Fri Nov 25 00:02:01 CET 2005


The comma removed by the patch below implies that users working from a
Subversion checkout should not use EasyInstall to periodically fetch the
latest version.  That's not what you intended to say, I assume?

http://peak.telecommunity.com/DevCenter/setuptools

 You should also inform your users of the need to run this command, if they 
-are working from a Subversion checkout, rather than using EasyInstall to 
+are working from a Subversion checkout rather than using EasyInstall to 
 periodically fetch the latest version.


Hmm, probably much better than the patch above:

-You should also inform your users of the need to run this command, if they 
-are working from a Subversion checkout, rather than using EasyInstall to 
-periodically fetch the latest version.
+If your users are working from a Subversion checkout rather than using
+EasyInstall, you should also inform them of the need to run this command 
+to periodically fetch the latest version.


John


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